I got the point, but these sounds are a little over-annoying lol (I mean, a cave has to be annoying in some point). With less "zubats" it will be better LOL
I only hear an evolving pad with a minecraft piston moving and some spiders lololol
Definitely lacks more ambientation.
nah dude, this is good, this is really good.
at 1:58 and its repetition, in first instance I thought u could use only bass drum beats instead of that bassdrum-snare pattern... it would make more contrast between those sections (same as in 3:44.. it changes too drastically the texture of ur tune), but well, just sayin!
All my feedback!
yeah, it's still rough around the edges I intend to work a little on it and smooth it out. I'll definitely try your idea out. And thanks for listening :P
The idea is good, but there are some things about it..
(yeah here begins the criticism, ehem constructive criticism!)
This isn't jazz, actually ur using pentatonic minor scale tipical on blues
There are always good ways of using this scale, but u have to innovate with it because everyone uses these (every guitarist on earth lol)
This tune lacks a center. You should really start building a short melody (shorter), catchy, maybe not with a big movement on it (short intervals and lots of repetitions), just to get the feeling!!
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Thanks for the good review! I'll see what I can do.
Awesome work dude, really liked it, it is your voice? pro singing!
I wouldn't say it's indie, but it sure is good. full score and support :)
Yeah I decided to change it to the pop category haha. Thanks so much for the feedback! and no, I am just the guitarist/producer. Our singer doesn't have a newgrounds account :(
It really sounds like "final boss stage", but it could be way better.
Dont stick too much with melodies.. you're abusing too much for the main tune, specially on the intro section.. (lately, it sounds more dinamic cus of the guitars, but that melody stills there)
Liked it though, good job :)
Thanks for the feedback!
There are some weird passages that ruins the chill (the mix of ascending n descending melodies)
This is not jazz bro! It could be longer also.
I liked the idea though.
I liked it pretty much
With better drums, it would be awesome.
Oh, and real instruments of course.. that bass and (i think) guitar would make much of a difference if recorded! With all those improvements, it would deserve 5 :P
Good job bro
Thanks man, I appreciate the C&C. I'm planning to do more actual instrumentals, so hopefully you can check em out in the future =)
Nice tune dude
Enjoyed it, it sure is an action-type song!
Nice "8-bit" tune
I didn't like those drums tho.. they're too techno (not the sound, but the fast shed's)
I enjoyed the song but it's too short!
damn, that splash's too loud man...
It's like creepy techno, weird mix bro
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