Ewinwinwinson's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eerie Cave]

I got the point, but these sounds are a little over-annoying lol (I mean, a cave has to be annoying in some point). With less "zubats" it will be better LOL
I only hear an evolving pad with a minecraft piston moving and some spiders lololol
Definitely lacks more ambientation.

[Allegro]

nah dude, this is good, this is really good.
at 1:58 and its repetition, in first instance I thought u could use only bass drum beats instead of that bassdrum-snare pattern... it would make more contrast between those sections (same as in 3:44.. it changes too drastically the texture of ur tune), but well, just sayin!
All my feedback!

aaronmusslewhite responds:

yeah, it's still rough around the edges I intend to work a little on it and smooth it out. I'll definitely try your idea out. And thanks for listening :P

[Blues]

The idea is good, but there are some things about it..
(yeah here begins the criticism, ehem constructive criticism!)
This isn't jazz, actually ur using pentatonic minor scale tipical on blues
There are always good ways of using this scale, but u have to innovate with it because everyone uses these (every guitarist on earth lol)
This tune lacks a center. You should really start building a short melody (shorter), catchy, maybe not with a big movement on it (short intervals and lots of repetitions), just to get the feeling!!
Take this as a tip! If u're not familiar with some terms u always can rely on google. Good luck bro :)

Ediblefungus responds:

Thanks for the good review! I'll see what I can do.

[New Horizons (MH)]

Awesome work dude, really liked it, it is your voice? pro singing!
I wouldn't say it's indie, but it sure is good. full score and support :)

pearljam10 responds:

Yeah I decided to change it to the pop category haha. Thanks so much for the feedback! and no, I am just the guitarist/producer. Our singer doesn't have a newgrounds account :(

[Acoustic Slam]

Nice tune!
I liked it pretty much
With better drums, it would be awesome.
Oh, and real instruments of course.. that bass and (i think) guitar would make much of a difference if recorded! With all those improvements, it would deserve 5 :P
Good job bro

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate the C&C. I'm planning to do more actual instrumentals, so hopefully you can check em out in the future =)

[Empty Clip]

Nice tune dude
Enjoyed it, it sure is an action-type song!
good job

[Pit Trap]

Nice "8-bit" tune
I didn't like those drums tho.. they're too techno (not the sound, but the fast shed's)
I enjoyed the song but it's too short!

[Medieval Adventure]

Care with those blank spaces... they make the piece lose continuity! Also, diminished chords can't just be put there, you must have some shading and logic connection between sections.. :)
I really liked it tho,
Good work buddy!!!!

DeseNutz responds:

Thanks! I will be the first to admit that I don't know what I am doing; for the diminished chords I just kinda played around on the keyboard until I found something I thought fit :P

Thanks again for the input!