Ewinwinwinson's Reviews

[LOZ: Four Parodies]

I think it needs more exaggeration..
It's the same as playing zelda..
Facial expressions would do everything in these jokes, anyways, I liked the sounds and the idea

[The Victim of Prejudice]

funny!!
you just need to work on the voice..
maybe improve the drawing quality a little bit!
I liked it

[Kirby's Sky Tussle]

8:::D

Geeksly responds:

:O no stars.....</3 breakin' my heart man :(

[Gravity Duck 2]

yay! I finished it! nice game buddy, it got me caught for like 20 mins haha
Music is awesome, it gives the whole 8-bit atmosphere to the game
Graphics the same
Levels are not too challenging, but it's fun to play tho
Story is typical, but these kind of games dont need more than that, right?
5 stars buddy
(Moar levels!!!!!!!!!)

[10800 Zombies]

DAMN!!
this game is so fuckin awesome,
5 stars.

kurismakku responds:

Thanks ! I am trying to fix the loading, please understand people ! :D

[Cold as I]

Simple game! not boring tho.. I think visuals will do better when u improve it.. gonna be waiting for it

[Eerie Cave]

I got the point, but these sounds are a little over-annoying lol (I mean, a cave has to be annoying in some point). With less "zubats" it will be better LOL
I only hear an evolving pad with a minecraft piston moving and some spiders lololol
Definitely lacks more ambientation.

[Allegro]

nah dude, this is good, this is really good.
at 1:58 and its repetition, in first instance I thought u could use only bass drum beats instead of that bassdrum-snare pattern... it would make more contrast between those sections (same as in 3:44.. it changes too drastically the texture of ur tune), but well, just sayin!
All my feedback!

aaronmusslewhite responds:

yeah, it's still rough around the edges I intend to work a little on it and smooth it out. I'll definitely try your idea out. And thanks for listening :P

[Blues]

The idea is good, but there are some things about it..
(yeah here begins the criticism, ehem constructive criticism!)
This isn't jazz, actually ur using pentatonic minor scale tipical on blues
There are always good ways of using this scale, but u have to innovate with it because everyone uses these (every guitarist on earth lol)
This tune lacks a center. You should really start building a short melody (shorter), catchy, maybe not with a big movement on it (short intervals and lots of repetitions), just to get the feeling!!
Take this as a tip! If u're not familiar with some terms u always can rely on google. Good luck bro :)

Ediblefungus responds:

Thanks for the good review! I'll see what I can do.

[Time Zombie]

Not enough clocks buddy!
How can the ruler of time control it with 2 clocks?!?!?!?!
lol, it's and it's not a joke

moar clockss!!
Awesome job btw

G-F-D responds:

You are so right, he needs a clock somewhere. Hanging from his cane! GENIUZ!

[Maelstrom]

I'd paint my entire room with this.
Amazing, trippy coloring... awesome work!!

What's that lizard doing down there?!

Zeppelyn responds:

Thanks. And it's a generic amphibian, note the gills.

[Bird Brain]

Amazing work, shocking yet interesting creature.
It's visually shocking as the fact that most humans glue their thoughts with shit, and position themselves on top of the world!
I loved the blend of colours.. maybe the contrast between the grey stone and the colorfull bird/man is a little rough... I'd really like to see the stone with the same coloring as the man/bird, it'd be interesting!

Also, his forehead could go softly into the bird's body.. just recommending :)

I loved it!

DillonBrannick responds:

Thanks for the feedback, yeah wasn't really too certain about how the face would go into the bird, I kinda did it like it was his hair, but maybe I should have done it more fluidly , like that of a bird.
As for the stark contrast, I think that gives a bit of pop to the main focus, but I am seeing where your coming from, doing a similar job to that of the bird.
Thanks again, appreciate it.