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Eerie Cave Eerie Cave

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I got the point, but these sounds are a little over-annoying lol (I mean, a cave has to be annoying in some point). With less "zubats" it will be better LOL
I only hear an evolving pad with a minecraft piston moving and some spiders lololol
Definitely lacks more ambientation.



Allegro Allegro

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nah dude, this is good, this is really good.
at 1:58 and its repetition, in first instance I thought u could use only bass drum beats instead of that bassdrum-snare pattern... it would make more contrast between those sections (same as in 3:44.. it changes too drastically the texture of ur tune), but well, just sayin!
All my feedback!


aaronmusslewhite responds:

yeah, it's still rough around the edges I intend to work a little on it and smooth it out. I'll definitely try your idea out. And thanks for listening :P


Blues Blues

Rated 2 / 5 stars

The idea is good, but there are some things about it..
(yeah here begins the criticism, ehem constructive criticism!)
This isn't jazz, actually ur using pentatonic minor scale tipical on blues
There are always good ways of using this scale, but u have to innovate with it because everyone uses these (every guitarist on earth lol)
This tune lacks a center. You should really start building a short melody (shorter), catchy, maybe not with a big movement on it (short intervals and lots of repetitions), just to get the feeling!!
Take this as a tip! If u're not familiar with some terms u always can rely on google. Good luck bro :)


Ediblefungus responds:

Thanks for the good review! I'll see what I can do.


New Horizons (MH) New Horizons (MH)

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome work dude, really liked it, it is your voice? pro singing!
I wouldn't say it's indie, but it sure is good. full score and support :)


pearljam10 responds:

Yeah I decided to change it to the pop category haha. Thanks so much for the feedback! and no, I am just the guitarist/producer. Our singer doesn't have a newgrounds account :(


The Final Showdown The Final Showdown

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It really sounds like "final boss stage", but it could be way better.
Dont stick too much with melodies.. you're abusing too much for the main tune, specially on the intro section.. (lately, it sounds more dinamic cus of the guitars, but that melody stills there)
Liked it though, good job :)


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BrCz responds:

Thanks for the feedback!


The Cruise The Cruise

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

There are some weird passages that ruins the chill (the mix of ascending n descending melodies)
This is not jazz bro! It could be longer also.
I liked the idea though.



Acoustic Slam Acoustic Slam

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice tune!
I liked it pretty much
With better drums, it would be awesome.
Oh, and real instruments of course.. that bass and (i think) guitar would make much of a difference if recorded! With all those improvements, it would deserve 5 :P
Good job bro


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Fr0zEnPh0eNiX responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate the C&C. I'm planning to do more actual instrumentals, so hopefully you can check em out in the future =)


Empty Clip Empty Clip

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice tune dude
Enjoyed it, it sure is an action-type song!
good job



Pit Trap Pit Trap

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice "8-bit" tune
I didn't like those drums tho.. they're too techno (not the sound, but the fast shed's)
I enjoyed the song but it's too short!


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The Bones of this House The Bones of this House

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

damn, that splash's too loud man...
It's like creepy techno, weird mix bro